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Monday, February 20, 2012

Monday Morning

On Monday Mornings it is hard to wake up but on Sundays you don’t have to.
When my mum said wake up get ready four school i went back to sleep then
I was late four school but when i got to school i was not late.In the morning my mum said it is time to wake up get ready four school.
When i waked up I was tied and wanted to go back to sleep but had to go to school.

Wake up wake up my mum said, it is time four school when I woke up I was half a sleep.
I got greased four school then I had my beak fast I got my bag then I went of to school when I was walking down the road a bird pooped on my hand.


I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience.
Here are 3 versions. Which Monday Morning introduction do you like best and why?

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